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my songs

Hey. I showed some of my songs to a few people and they all said i should post them as a journal. I don't mind people commenting on them but i spent a long time working on them so please don't steal them or upload them as your own, thank you.

 

BLACKEST DEATH

The darkness, bleak, surrounds me

death calling my name

silent whispers through the fog that surrounds my heart

can't you see I'm hurting

can't you see my soul is drowning in this sea of emptiness

standing on the edge of the world ready to fall,

nothing here to stop me from ending it this way

Your kiss brings light that battles with the angel of death,

determined to drag me down

the temptation of darkness calls to me

can you save me before it's too late

can't you see I'm hurting

can't you see my soul is drowning in this sea of emptiness

standing on the edge of the world ready to fall,

nothing here to stop me from ending it this way

broken promises, shattered world

my life lay in ruins around my feet.

memories of the past don't mean anything anymore

am I at the end of all I can be?

can't you see I'm hurting

can't you see my soul is drowning in this sea of emptiness

standing on the edge of the world ready to fall,

nothing here to stop me from ending it this way

*************************************

BROKEN WORLD

The silent streets as fallen angels turn to stone

struggling for one last breath in this tainted world of sin and shame

the poison of a million twisted minds falls from the sky like rain

and we drown

falling into pain, no way out and i'm going down

no one to save me now, it's too late

broken dreams and failed gods

crying their tears of a better world that's lost

no hope to save us now,

edens been forgotten

falling into pain, no way out and i'm going down

no one to save me now, it's too late

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CONFLICT

This heavyness is resting on my heart,

breaking it with the weight of eternal torture.

so many thoughts in my over- crowded brain

these conflicting emotions are driving me insane

the darkness inside me as I lay down to rest,

envelops me in shame

the voices in my head are screaming with my pain

I don't know what else to do, so I scream too

it's always dark in my mind,

cold and black and fading fast

this conflict in my heart is killing me

and I don't know if I care anymore

the pain you see now is worse than any you saw

 


Posted on 12/03/2006 5:43 AM Visits: 14
tatianaf: 12/03/2006 10:38 AM
You are a great writter! and I hope that someone look at these poems and give you a chance!
I like it a lot thanks for post it!! now you have a fan ;DDDhehehe!!
villespunkbitch: 12/03/2006 10:42 AM
thank you so much! i know they're kind of dark but it's how i write and get my feelings out if i'm feeling kinda down. i'll probably post more tomorrow
tatianaf: 12/03/2006 10:50 AM
You welcom Hunn keep writing!!
karinvam: 12/04/2006 4:27 AM
Honey wow, I'm all chocked up and stuff. I don't know what to say...it's just....It's so beautiful! I knew you were talented before but this is just so ..WOW! You could so write songs for me if I was a singer! (in a real band, not the lame one I'm in) Simply stunning darling!
frankaaay! :D: 12/08/2006 10:05 AM
yay! i like them! :)
daisy2: 05/30/2007 6:40 AM
your singing about your true feelings, which is great, it can be some sort of counciling for you, cause that's what I do when I write my songs, keep writing, can I ask a question? Are you in a band? cause I am!!!!!
villespunkbitch: 05/30/2007 7:05 AM
thanks, no i'm not in a band, i'd love to be though
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